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hows my french (im 12)?

hello my name is Lea Lea's spelled I'm twelve years old my birthday IS on January 14, I live in a Australia, WITH my six brothers, four sisters, my mother and my father. my brothers are called trevor, Bradley, Billy Jack, Harley and Michael. my sisters are called Tash, karla, kate and maddie. My mother's name is Donna interest. and my father's name is Trevor. I like My Mother, her eyes a blue and brown hair. I Have A Dog, Her name is jess, she IS three years. I like swimming, BECAUSE IT Fun collage that is my Sacred Heart. Maguire interest my class in September. I apprehend I love music Learn guitar, BECAUSE IT'S easy Quebec. I hate dancing, BECAUSE IT Quebec boring crib like lasagna, pasta, chips and sauce, pastry desserts, and chocolate mousse. love chocolate mousse. It's my choice.

I'll do it line by line to make it more clear what you did wrong. Hello. (Good) My name is Lea. (Good) The spelling of my name is Lea. (The spelling of my name is Leah. It's more complex than that and say) I am twelve years. (Good) My birthday on Jan. 14 EST. (His "my" birthday because begins with a vowel. You do not need to use "it" because you already "my birthday" as the subject. In French, you put the date before the month.) I live in Australia with my six brothers and sisters my four, my mother and my father. ("In Australia" is incorrect, "a" is only for the cities, you use "in" with a country woman, and Australia is how you say in French in Australia. Because you have more of a brother and a sister, you can not say "my six brothers" and "My Four Sisters, you must use the plural" my. "Furthermore," ma "is feminine, while" father "is male, which explains why "my father" is replaced with "my father.") My brothers called Trevor Bradley, Billy Jack, and Michael Harley. My sisters are called Tash, Karla, Kate and Maddie. (Again, you can not say "my brothers" and "my sister," you have the plural "my". The correct way of saying: "Their names are" are saying, "They call themselves," which is the reflexive form of the verb "call," which means "to the call. "Since you have more than one person, the correct conjugation is" call. "It is written" called "because it is reflexive, that is to say, instead of saying "My brothers call" is now "My brothers call themselves." Same with "My sisters are called ...) I have called my father called Donna and Trevor. (You do not need the" is "because you've" known "as a verb. Again," my father "is replaced by the masculine form of" my father "and" called "is changed to" called "because" name "is" tu "form conjugation, not the "it" shape) I look like my mother. Her a blue eyes and brown hair. (The first sentence is fine. Second sentence which you need "blue" instead of "blue" because "eyes" is plural) I Have A bitch. Her name is Jess. It an SNA three. (Normally, if you're talking about a dog in general, you would say "A dog," but because you go on to state that it is a daughter, he becomes "A bitch." (But note that what you wrote "a dog" is wrong because "dog" is masculine). Then "She IT'S three years "is replaced by" an SNA it three "in French because you do not say" I'm three years, "you say" I three years. ") IT'S BECAUSE I love swimming Quebec Fun. (You need an article, hence the" la "and you have not need an article from "it" and "the") My school is called the Sacred Heart. (Unlike English, you would not really say "My school is Sacred Heart, you say that the more accurate" My school is called the Sacred Heart ") My class is called September Maguire (I do not really know what you're trying to say here is seven Maguire the name of your class? Then again, you would say "My class is called not "My class is") I love learning music. (Because you have "admirer" conjugated, you need to "train" infinitive. Again, you need an article in front of the music) I like learning the guitar easy IT'S BECAUSE Quebec. (Need to Article opposite guitaire) BECAUSE I HATE dancing bored ca Quebec. (Again, because "hate" is conjugated, "dance" should be in the infinitive. "It bothers me (it bothers me) is more sophisticated than his" boring ") I love the crib lasagna, pasta, fried aves sauces, desserts, pastry and chocolate mousse. (You need items in front of everything.) I love the foam Chocolate. This is my favorite dish. (Need an article in front of foam. "Prefer is my flat" = He is my favorite dish. It better than saying "This is my favorite," which in French, raises the question, my favorite what?) Overall, pretty decent for a beginner. A couple of pointers: Be consistent. For example: I gave is called simple interest. and my father's name is Trevor. These two sentences are basically saying the same thing, the name of my mother is present, the name of my father is present, but how they are structured differently. For your mother, you wrote "called" while your father that you wrote "called." In addition, you included "Is" after your mom called, but not your father. Why? What makes them different? Through and ask yourself why each verb is conjugated in the way it is and why it is there in the articles first. These can be tricky. In English we just say that I love les pommes, puis-je pas comme les pommes, en français, vous devez l'article (le, la, les, l ') Donc, j'aime les pommes est J'aime les pommes, just as I like to learn the guitar is like learning the guitar.

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